The Town Hall Archives

Kanimoto · Last edited by Kanimoto on Wed Aug 18, 2004 6:37 pm; edited 6 times in total

OKAY!

Things You Need To Know Before Reading This Fic:

I started it a while back.
There probably will be some "mild" violence in it.
I'm posting it in script format because I need more practice writing that way. Besides, doesn't anyone besides me think it's weird that, even though AIO is a radio program, I've never seen a fanfiction script about it (except for this one)?

Hope y'all enjoy!!

Scenes 1-2

SCENE ONE — Odyssey Middle School hallway to the cafeteria
There is mixed background chatter as CAL and ALEX talk.

CAL
You know something, Alex?

ALEX
What?

CAL
I’m bored.

ALEX
(mutters) Not again...

CAL
I mean, ever since NovaCom and Andromeda got shut down, there hasn’t been much for excitement around here.

ALEX
But Cal—

CAL
(interrupts) Think about it, Alex! No more hidden cameras or unknown hackers.

ALEX
Cal.

CAL
No more suspicious radio towers or Nova Boxes or...hey, even the Odinton bug.

ALEX
You don’t need to remind me...

CAL
Whatever. (sighs) I wish I could find something exciting to do around here.

ALEX
Cal, you’re the only kid I know who isn’t glad that NovaCom isn’t gone.

CAL
At least when they were here, we could have fun.

ALEX
You’re also the only kid I know who calls danger “fun.”

CAL
(whines) But there’s nothing to do...

ALEX
(annoyed) We have plenty to do, Cal! Soccer tryouts are this afternoon. Mr. Whittaker’s remodeled the Imagination Station! Whit’s End has a new ice cream flavor! (grumbles) We have a history test tomorrow!

CAL
Alex, you know I like history.

ALEX
And besides that, we’re going to Wonderworld after school!

CAL
Whatever.

They enter the cafeteria. Mixed chatter gets louder.

CAL
You bring your lunch?

ALEX
With the poison the cafeteria’s been pumping out, how could I not?

CAL
Let’s find a table.

They walk for a few moments and then sit down.

ALEX
So...what’s the big meeting at Wonderworld all about?

CAL
I just wanted to get everyone there so, y’know, we can try to think of something exciting to do.

ALEX
Try to.

BOY #1
Excuse me. I-is it okay if we sit with you guys?

CAL
Uh...

ALEX
Sure. You guys twins?

BOY #1
(sits down) Obviously. M-my name’s Simon.

BOY #2
I’m Elijah.

ALEX
I’m Alex, and this is Cal.

CAL
You said you guys just moved in? From where?

ELIJAH
New Jersey.

SIMON
Is it okay with you guys if we stop the questions and eat in peace?

ALEX
(taken aback) Uh...sure...okay...

CAL
Sorry.

SCENE TWO — Outside Simon and Elijah’s house
SIMON
There he is. (shouting while running) Hey! Hey, Mr. Mailman, I gotta ask you a question!

WOOTON
Well, go ahead. Go ahead and take your time. I’m way behind schedule, y’know!

SIMON
(panting) Umm...for the past few days, you’ve been leaving my house some mail that’s supposed to go to the house on the right.

WOOTON
Oh. That’s Mrs. Randolph’s house.

SIMON
I know. (paper rustles as he hands over the mail) Here’s the mail.

WOOTON
Oh, thanks. Hey, your family just moved into town, right?

SIMON
Yeah. Why?

WOOTON
Just wondering. (clears throat) On behalf of the greater part of Odyssey, I welcome you...

SIMON
Simon Maxwell.

WOOTON
Right. Simon Maxwell. I’m Wooton Bassett, by the way.

SIMON
What kind of name is that?

WOOTON
I don’t know. You’re going to have to ask my parents; they named me.

SIMON
Ah.

(beat)

WOOTON
So, is that all you wanted? To tell me that I’ve been leaving the wrong mail at your house?

SIMON
No...I wanted to ask you something else.

WOOTON
Then ask away. (mutters) Especially since you didn’t ask me anything yet.

SIMON
Is this town a good one?

WOOTON
Well, what’s your definition of good?

SIMON
Computers. Writing. Paintball. Preferably anything where I don’t get beat up.

WOOTON
Oh, we’ve got plenty of stuff like that. Maybe I could tell you about it...

SIMON
Uhh...thanks, but I gotta go.

SIMON starts to run back to his house.

WOOTON
Me too. (beat) Uh, Simon? What was that about not getting beat up?

SIMON
(shouts) Nothing. I’ll tell you later.

WOOTON
Hmm...

Screech · Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 6:32 pm Post subject:

Cool.

Bmuntz · Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 7:15 pm Post subject:

So Maxwell is in town wonder whats brewing (Hope not beer okay that was bad) and I really dislike the way your doing the scirpt but I will live.

Screech · Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 7:18 pm Post subject:

I don't think it's that bad.

Bmuntz · Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 7:20 pm Post subject:

It's not that it's that bad it's just the style a little differnet then most stories but it's okay.

Kanimoto · Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 7:25 pm Post subject:

Criticism.

Oh, well, I'll live. :undecided: Wink

Thanks, Captain Jack! Surprised

8) Kani

Bmuntz · Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 7:29 pm Post subject:

I'm not saying that your storey is bad it is quite good so far and when will we see a new chapter. And they's nothing wrong with so critism look at the other fanfiction from Catspaw it got some critism. So don't crey over some critism.

Sonuna Hydris · Lurker Joined: 24 Nov 2002 Posts: 392 Location: Vector

If you don't get criticism, people are either lying regarding what they think or you're perfect. ^_^
I don't have any though.

Kanimoto · Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 7:47 pm Post subject:

Eugene Kendall™ · Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 7:49 pm Post subject:

ooooo whens the next scene going to be up