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balletdancer11
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 Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2004 9:35 am Post subject: Another AIO fan fiction!!! (I know i'm copying) |
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Here i go! (i hope it doesn't sound dorkey!!) 
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Faintly from behind Connie heard a muffled voice "CCCCOOOONNNNIIIIEEEEEE".
Cut it out you kids, I’m finishing an order, Okay so Alex you wanted a junior raspberry Ripple cone. "CCCCOOOONNNIIIIIEEEEEE". Stop it you kids, said Connie thoroughly annoyed.
Ccc-onnnniee that’s not some kid. it’s a strange man, said Trent!!!!
“WHAT!!!” said Connie, know with a worried tone in her voice!
“Okay………I’m coming” said Connie, on her way to find out who was the mysterious man.
CCCCCCCOOOOONNNNNIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEE………………said the muffled voice, CUT IT OUT!!!! No Connie its me!!!
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80% chance a rain this afternoon!! That’s it for to know but join us at noon again tomorrow……..(next was the sound of the radio clicking off) Well…..looks like another rainy afternoon, said Mr. Whittaker on his daily errand run before lunch.
“No………….no, no it can’t be”, said Mr. Whittaker as he pulled of the highway! That can't be her standing by that car!!!!
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Screech
The Fonz
Joined: 17 Mar 2004
Posts: 1894
Location: Right where I'm supposed to be.
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| Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2004 9:48 am Post subject: |
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| Interesting...... |
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balletdancer11
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| Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2004 10:35 am Post subject: |
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| It's just my 1st so i know its not very good!! |
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happysmiler
Llama Lover
Joined: 26 Nov 2003
Posts: 2221
Location: Over the ocean...
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| Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2004 4:09 pm Post subject: |
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| It is interesting. I'll have to see what happens next. |
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Laurie
Just Enjoys the Forums
Joined: 16 Mar 2003
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| Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2004 5:30 pm Post subject: |
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| It is very interesting. This is only your first attempt and already you have developed many possible plotlines. |
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Catspaw
AIO Fan Fiction Writer
Joined: 17 Jul 2003
Posts: 804
Location: Canada
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| Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2004 6:46 pm Post subject: |
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| Nice start! I'm looking forward to finding out who the mysterious people are! Maybe Monica Stone is the one that Whit saw - he certainly would be surprised to see her...Now I'll be trying to figure it out until you tell us. Ahhh! 8) |
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Neo3DGfx
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Joined: 22 Oct 2003
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| Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2004 7:32 pm Post subject: |
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| Catspaw wrote: | | Nice start! I'm looking forward to finding out who the mysterious people are! Maybe Monica Stone is the one that Whit saw - he certainly would be surprised to see her...Now I'll be trying to figure it out until you tell us. Ahhh! 8) |
Oh, that would be so cool!!!
Nice story.
Muhhaahh!!! I have bitten you all with the fan fiction bug!!! Now it's only a matter of time before I will infest your minds with the next step: Fan Films!!!!!
(Opps, did I say that out loud?  ) |
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balletdancer11
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| Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2004 8:28 am Post subject: |
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Sorry i'm taking a little longer on the second chapter!!
I kinda forgot that i had to put up another one!! I was just enjoying a not rush time!!!
i'm working on the second!! It'll be up soon!! |
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Screech
The Fonz
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Posts: 1894
Location: Right where I'm supposed to be.
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| Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2004 8:40 am Post subject: |
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| Hokey-Dokey |
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Neo3DGfx
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| Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2004 10:38 am Post subject: |
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| Oke-Day! |
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