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Eugene Kendall™
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 Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2004 4:59 pm Post subject: Bob and Jim scripts |
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im doing a comic called bob and jim and heres the script so far i could use the reviews
BOB AND JIM VOLUME !
THEY MEET
bob:lala
jim:what in the world....
bob:umm hi im bob
jim: sure and im batman
bob:really
jim:no , im jim
(that was just a introductory episode)
ill post more l8er i have made the comic up to volume four (8 strips each) |
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-Mellow boy
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Location: Canada BC (like you even know where that is)
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| Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2004 5:18 pm Post subject: |
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| I didn't understand what was going on there... |
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Eugene Kendall™
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| Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2004 5:19 pm Post subject: |
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| its script for my comic i need reviews |
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bright eyed
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Location: the great wilderness of wyoming
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| Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2004 1:45 am Post subject: |
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| I liked it - I did get what was going on, probubly cuz its not a brand new gag or anything, but it is still funny - I'll have to see what I think once you keep it going. |
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Roku
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| Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2004 7:30 pm Post subject: |
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| Kind of funny, actually. Although the name "Bob and Jim" hauntingly reminds me of "Bob and George". |
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